How a Magnet is Made
A magnet is an object that attracts other object. The process of making a magnet involves a number of steps. First, small pieces of paper are randomly arranged on a table. Next, a plastic comb is briskly rubbed with a piece of wool so that the comb gains electrons, and negativelycharged comb is held over the pieces of paper. After that, the pieces of paper are thoroughly removed from the comb. Finally, the first step is repeated through fourth step to verify results.
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Dear Noura,
Thank you for posting your process paragraph to your blog. I enjoyed reading it.
Here is my feedback:
you are required to write a 5-sentence paragraph for this exercise; so, please try to join the first two steps to produce one compound sentence , which will help make it a 5-sentence paragraph. Please note, it is not wrong to write 6 sentences; however, for this particular exercise on page 128 in the WB you need to write five sentences only.
Thank you!
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